Tuesday, February 23, 2010

Guidance

This one is a collaboration between a friend and myself. A true jugalbandi of poetic verses. We both alternately came up with verses to attach to the ones already present:). Sort of like two minds coming up with a story on the fly.


It was a dark and scary street
To traverse it was a challenge indeed
I took my steps in sulking doubt
Guidance was hard to come about

But there was no need for despair.
Guidance like luck, often catches you unaware.
The right path is not easily seen
Visible to eyes, that remain keen

Spoken words cause a magic unique
Encourage me to aim for the peak
Am keen to turn words into actions
this dark street will not beat my intentions

Other times there is no need for a talk.
Magical sights can inspire us on our own walk.
Guidance here is languishing in third person view
Don't ignore, just take it as your queue.







2 comments:

  1. Good 1...but shouldn't it be 'cue' instead of 'queue' in the last line ?

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  2. Ahh...well spotted.
    But thats wat you call poetic freedom ;)

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