This one is for first times ;)
For every experience worth its dime,
nothing beats the feeling of the first time.
We are usually nervous with worry,
or just excited and in a hurry
If it were my first date with a girl,
I would try my best to make her swirl.
If it were my first tooth to fall,
I would celebrate with icecream down the hall.
If it were about my very first ride,
I would have someone special by my side.
If it were the first verse I ever wrote,
A jubilant jiggle would have my vote.
But sadly this is none of those.
Something important - naah!! not even close.
Still I lie awake the night before,
Wishing I could just sleep and snore.
You might ponder my need to rhyme,
Alas! this first is always a stressful time.
It ain't the first girl or ride or some other life's gem.
Its just simply the first exam of the sem. ;)
nothing beats the feeling of the first time.
We are usually nervous with worry,
or just excited and in a hurry
If it were my first date with a girl,
I would try my best to make her swirl.
If it were my first tooth to fall,
I would celebrate with icecream down the hall.
If it were about my very first ride,
I would have someone special by my side.
If it were the first verse I ever wrote,
A jubilant jiggle would have my vote.
But sadly this is none of those.
Something important - naah!! not even close.
Still I lie awake the night before,
Wishing I could just sleep and snore.
You might ponder my need to rhyme,
Alas! this first is always a stressful time.
It ain't the first girl or ride or some other life's gem.
Its just simply the first exam of the sem. ;)
God one Doc!
ReplyDeleteI can see the positive outcomes of my critique. Though I expected something about the first television series u watched or the broadband connection you used or your very first lappy in this poem.
If exams can enkindle such creativity in you, I am optimistic that a mundane day at the office doing shitty work will do wonders to your poetic abilities.
Wishing you many such boredom filled days! :)
I will probably write about a show or two in the near future. Just not so early while I am gathering followers yet ;).
ReplyDeleteI wouldn't call it boredom but being inspired by circumstance ;)